Adahlia

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  • Name: Adahlia
  • Sex: Couple
  • Age: 24
  • Location: somewhere smack dab between Narnia and David Lynch's Twin Peaks
  • Occupation: creep. scud. jew.
  • Scars/Birthmarks: a tore up elbow, a two inch gash on my right hand and a birthmark on my thigh like a pale constellation, an abstract bicycle hidden between the crows
  • Music: queerwulf. jay reatard. sex vid. Richie Cunning. Loverance. Yung Gully. APB. add/c. sexy. dos tornados. fucked up. infest. void. surrender. sleep. jawbreaker. hey girl. hooky. hickey. allergic to bullshit. drunken boat.
  • Movies: mysterious skin. the adventures of sebastian cole. kung fu hustle. american gangster. Death Proof.
  • Videogames: LoZ:TP
  • Food: Ferran Adria. Thomas Keller. Grant Achatz. Eric Ripert. etc. etc.
  • Books: Salad Days, The Eithical Slut, Geek Love, Julie/Julia, anything by Christopher Moore or David Sedaris
  • Hobbies: skinning animals. making pies. porch drinking. stoop reading. bar knitting.
  • Best Time: have a good time all the time.
  • I Have a Crush on: jerks and burnouts
  • Perfect Match: bad people with good palates
  • Drink: elderflower soda
  • Smoke: nah
  • Bad Habits: too dumb to quit too tough to die.
  • Where I Hang Out: long abandoned train tracks. woods. under piers. porches. places with fireflies.
  • Why I am a Burning Angel: MOB
I need feedback on my new comics
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11.13.08 05:36 AM

So I started on my comic book. I am posting some rough character sketches and the first page and would love some feed back. So this is my first time drawing comics. I have never really done this style of art, especially following a sequencial story line. I was hoping y'all could look at the first page and give me some feedback. Specifically things like what do you think is going on so far, what do you think the relationship is between the two characters, can you tell what all the drawings are (especially the food plate in the third frame), if the perspective looks ok and at least semi-realistic etc. I would greatly appreciate any pointers. My scanner sucks and made it kind of blurry and cut the edges off a bit, but I think its still pretty readable. Let me know whatcha think









Comments (15)
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02.22.10 09:37 PM  
do you still make comics? because you seem to be really good at it.
12.24.09 02:18 AM  
reminds me of mike judge <3
05.10.09 08:38 PM  
Definetly a zine style strip, work on the word cramming but other than that good stuff.
05.06.09 04:42 AM  
I want a copy...
05.06.09 04:42 AM  
Send it to High Times, They'll print it.
04.06.09 01:46 AM  
Haha, fucking epic.
02.10.09 09:39 PM  
Um they're good, Im not a fan of that R. Crumb/Harvey Pekar kind of style but I think you could have alot of dialogue with the characters. The text is too crammed in that long speech frame with the guy spewing. I got into trouble for that when submitting my strips but its easy to solve. looks good for a zine if thats what you wanna submit it to. Alistiar.
02.07.09 09:05 PM  
I like what i see, u got skills!
01.01.09 09:18 AM  
These are sweet. Kinda reminds me of Superjail.
11.28.08 04:12 AM  
really dig it. stay golden pony boy, stay golden.
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