So I started on my comic book. I am posting some rough character
sketches and the first page and would love some feed back. So this is
my first time drawing comics. I have never really done this
style of art, especially following a sequencial story line. I was
hoping y'all could look at the first page and give me some feedback.
Specifically things like what do you think is going on so far, what do
you think the relationship is between the two characters, can you tell
what all the drawings are (especially the food plate in the third
frame), if the perspective looks ok and at least semi-realistic etc. I
would greatly appreciate any pointers. My scanner sucks and made it
kind of blurry and cut the edges off a bit, but I think its still
pretty readable. Let me know whatcha think













